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Author Topic: Thoughts on "Rider"  (Read 1934 times)

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Thoughts on "Rider"
« on: April 05, 2007, 12:56:29 PM »

So... yeah. Any thoughts?

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Re:Thoughts on "Rider"
« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2007, 09:27:51 PM »

Inspired by actual events?  :-*

I like it.  I was confused by some of the terminology, considering I still don't have a solid grasp of the Shadowrun world, but I could tell that the rider was comfortable on a bike - the language used for that really brought me in.  I wanted to feel more movement from the bike, though.  I got the impression that the guy was on his motorcycle in front of a green screen.  But it captured the situation and the world really well.
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Re:Thoughts on "Rider"
« Reply #2 on: April 20, 2007, 09:49:03 AM »

other than the typo in the last line it was a nice smooth opening...
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Re:Thoughts on "Rider"
« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2007, 09:55:39 PM »

Ok so I got to the thread a little late to see the typo.  But great opening and the terminology is that of a biker and just a regular biker a speed biker.  So definitely a shadowrunner in the works....
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