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« on: February 09, 2007, 10:27:19 AM »
more to come later... As always, opinion and critiques welcome.

« Last Edit: April 22, 2009, 10:41:15 AM by Zone »
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« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2007, 01:18:02 AM »
Nice story.  I look forward to hearing more about Barge and Little Red  :)
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« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2007, 09:51:19 PM »
Yeah, that was bad-ass. Are we going to get to read more about them anytime soon?

I wouldn't mind knowing a little more about Red or Barge sometime soon.

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Re:Excerpts
« Reply #3 on: February 22, 2007, 02:56:20 PM »
That's a really good story  :)
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« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2007, 07:29:07 AM »
Its just one scene in a much longer work.  A work in progress.

Once I have it done, I'm planning on creating (having created ) a site for the whole novel.  I'll give you guys the password when its up.  

In the mean time, I'll change this scene out when I have something new to show you...

I love Barge. He's a great support character.  Wait until you meet his cousin....
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« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2007, 03:27:58 PM »
That's awesome
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« Reply #6 on: February 23, 2007, 05:26:26 PM »
Something about Sublime playing in my ear that made that story even better, or perhaps it was just that good to begin with, but I enjoyed it!
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« Reply #7 on: February 26, 2007, 04:46:53 PM »
I believe it was that damn good to begin with,  ;D
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« Reply #8 on: February 27, 2007, 12:00:18 PM »
Aw , shucks.  ;)

Now I have to finish up the next excerpt for y'all.

Let me know if there are crits as well.  Is this something about on par with SR novels that you've actually purchsed?
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« Reply #9 on: February 27, 2007, 12:13:37 PM »
For the most part, it depends on what author you read from.  Some read like children's and some I have to read with a dictionary next to me.  But I much prefer something with your simplicity...
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« Reply #10 on: February 27, 2007, 12:56:58 PM »
I'm not a big fan of pedantics, so I like your easy style of writing.

No critic here- and I can be pretty critical of things I don't like.

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« Reply #11 on: March 02, 2007, 08:07:03 AM »
Hey Zone when are you gonna finish your nexy excerpt? ;)
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« Reply #12 on: March 02, 2007, 10:04:56 AM »
I'll see if I can manage something this weekend...
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« Reply #13 on: March 03, 2007, 10:01:30 AM »
Okay, go back to the OP - it is now different.  Crane is an elf sami.
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« Reply #14 on: March 03, 2007, 11:13:22 AM »
Pretty good...
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